Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Scene Description

Success Criteria
  • Has strong adjectives
  • Different sentence beginnings
  • Different sentence lengths
  • A simile and/or alliteration
  • Has an introduction, body and conclusion
  • Thoughtful word choices
  • Writing simple and compound sentences correctly.
  Scene description- Rory

I turn around and in front of my eyes I see the most amazing scene. Water as bright as a torch in your eye. There was a nice refreshing cold drink waiting for you on a very hot day. The sand just makes you want to dig your feet in because it feels so nice. It is such a crisp and stunning day I just want to have a holiday there. It is such a sunny day; perfect for a swim in that water. It is so refreshing. It just makes me want to live there. The sand is so warm. I just want to put it all over me and sleep there. The drink is so delicious and cold that when I'm really hot, I can just tip it over my head. It is such a nice day with. If I just look at a picture of it gives me the beachy feel. A perfect place to relax.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    

Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Soccer Prize Giving

On Saturday i went to my soccer prize giving. Everybody got a certificate but some people got 2. I got top Goal scorer with 43 goals so i got a second certificate and a mini MC Donalds soccer ball

This is me with my Top Goal Scorer Certificate

Friday, June 12, 2015

My Reading task

IMG_0441.JPGThis is my Reading task. We had to draw a scale of how Jordan and Liam  are feeling in the book. I am blogging this because it is my week 7 blog post and I felt like doing this one.

My Maths Task

This is my maths task. The boxes were 5 meters and we had to measure the boxes without a ruler. I really liked this task and it was a little bit hard.
I am doing this maths task because its my only maths task and it was really fun

Friday, May 29, 2015

Thank you letter 2

This is my letter to Mike from camp. We had to do letters to thank parents for taking time of work and coming to camp.

Dear Simon 

Thank You for coming to camp and taking time off work. You made it one of my best camps of all of my camps.

You were really funny when we were playing the Animal game I like how you named your animal a Possum when we saw 2 Possums and one died.

It was fun  when me and you were in a team for handball we were a good team.
The funniest part was when my Dad tipped Jay Bea Caine and Mike and we laughed at them and during masterchef i started laughing at Caine again and he said we were going back to the kayaks and he said that he was going to tip me but he was joking

From Rory

Thank you letter

This is my letter to Mike from camp. We had to do letters to thank parents for taking time of work and coming to camp.

Dear Mike

Thank you for coming on camp. You were really funny with all your jokes.

My favorite part of camp was caving.  I was scared a tiny bit but the best 2 things about It was the last cave and seeing all of the wetas even that really big weta.

It was funny watching everybody freak out in fear factor and when they had to feel the Possum leg and when they had to feel the Betel.

The best thing about you was when you were doing handstands and you are a good cook.

From Rory

Friday, May 1, 2015

I Wish

Thinking task

Read the sentence below. Think deeply about your answer.
Make sure your answer is something that your teacher does not already know!
Add it to the tracking sheet when you are finished.

There are some examples below.

I wish my teacher knew….. That sometimes i'm tired because i'm  sleeping right below my Dad and i can hear him snoring and its so loud i can't sleep

Thursday, April 30, 2015

World War

This is my cousin  Michael hes the one in the army suit and the other person is William apeata he is famous because he saved some people in the war and he got the Victoria cross.

Friday, March 27, 2015

My Old Super Hero

My Superhero

Name: Rory

To control the villains minds to make the villains walk in to jail and lock themselves in. And to make all their  gadgets away and there superpowers.
Rainbow with a fantastic four sign. Has a big slecht hammer has a Captain America shield with white and green circles on it.
Secret Identity
Rory Cameron.
Sidekick / Team
Fantastic four.
The Avengers.
Green Beard and a dragon tail.
To defeat The Avengers.

My Special Place

My Special Place
Theres big soccer goals on the field on goalie in front of each goal and then about 10 players out
on the field with one team with blue shirts and the other team with red shirts.

And blue teams  goalie with a green shirt.

And red teams goalie with a orange shirt. My favorite team is the blue team.

My Special place is a soccer field because one of my favorite sports is soccer and because I play soccer. Soccer is so fun.

Monday, March 23, 2015

My super hero

This is me for the year it represents me because i love soccer and one of my favorite teams are brazil

Friday, March 13, 2015

Five nights at Freddy's

Five nights at Freddy's is one of the most scariest games on earth i play lots and i am up to night five it goes up to night seven it says that it goes up to five but there's to extra nights. Night six and night seven

Tuesday, February 17, 2015

New Zealand cricket team

Hi my name is Rory and I am doing a blog post about the Black Caps Cricket team .I am doing facts about the Black Caps which is New Zealand's cricket team. The Black Caps have played 399 test matches.Winning 80 of the test matches losing 160 test matches and drawing 159 test matches.

The Black Caps captain is Brendan McCullum. And the Black Caps coach is Mike Hesson. My favourite Black Caps cricket player is Ross Taylor. Ross Taylor started playing cricket when he was five. The Black Caps are my favorite cricket team in the world. The Black Caps played their first match in 1832. And Kane Williamson is Mr Moriarty's favourite Black Caps player.

Monday, February 9, 2015

Go Karts

In the holidays my cousin Mitchell brought his go karts down to the race track so every body in my family can have a turn at driving. Mitchell is a pro go kart racer he has lots and lots of Trophys  he is a car racer too. I almost crashed the go kart that i was using.Davis had a fast take off but got to scared and stoped the go kart.My brother Xav my dad and some of my other cousins had a time race and Mitchell won.