Monday, September 12, 2016

Colour poem

Colour Poem


WALT to use descriptive language to help create an image (picture) in our reader's head


Success Criteria
  • Use adjectives to describe the noun
  • Use adverbs to describe the verb (describe how the action is happening)
  • Use a range of verbs to explain what is happening
  • Use a range of nouns that help us identify with a colour

EXAMPLES


Black is the Colour of…….


  • A wicked witch zooming dangerously from castle to castle in search of potions
  • A lazy cat waiting patiently by the roaring fire for its night-time feed
  • A  majestic panther stalking its prey tactfully through the dense forest
  • A piece of licorice inviting me to sneak it from the brightly coloured box


Red is the colour of ……..


  • Slippery lipstick running down my face
  • A bright red Ferrari zooming fast in the race
  • Blood running down my foot, puddling on the ground
  • A rotten strawberry smelling like cheese
  • The sweet juicy raspberry dripping  from my mouth as I bite into it
  • A juicy watermelon inviting me to chomp on it
  • The courageous vampire biting into a man’s fresh skin squirting blood


Green is the colour of ……..

A Neon green Lambo Racing furiously down the street
Green Grass Flowing rapidly on the Football Field
A Green Nike Football Rolling swiftly into the goal
Green Leaves Flying majestically through the wind
A watermelon Exploding literally like a volcano

 













5 comments:

  1. great work Rory i like the nouns and the other learning parts that you have learnt into your colour poem well done

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  2. Good job Rory well done on your color poem!!!

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  3. Thats an awesome poem Rory i like the nike ball part and the watermelon part.

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  4. I like your color poem rory.from whetu

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  5. Nice work Rory and keep up the good job and i like you when you said A watermelon Exploding literally like a volcano

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